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kal el NANDO asked:
Hi again! Here is the last part of my writing. Can anybody tell me if there is a mistake if this little writing made for me…tomorrow i have to present it. so i am looking for any mistake. thanks again.
Hi again! Here is the last part of my writing. Can anybody tell me if there is a mistake if this little writing made for me…tomorrow i have to present it. so i am looking for any mistake. thanks again.
The club is situated between the coast and the mountains. For this reason, activities as rock climbing, mountain biking, hill walking among other sports can be practiced by young people. Similarly, the club is organizing three activities near the coast such as windsurfing, body board and surfing.
Conclusion
I highly recommend you joining to the club. Young people would find that adventures sports are an interesting and healthy way to spend free times. Likewise, the activities would also help you to become fitter.
The club is situated between the coast and the mountains. For this reason, activities SUCH as rock climbing, mountain biking, hill walking among other sports can be practiced by young people. Similarly, the club is organizing three activities near the coast such as windsurfing, body board and surfing.
Conclusion
I highly recommend THAT YOU JOIN the club. Young people would find that adventure (NO “S”) sports are an interesting and healthy way to spend free time (NO “S”). Likewise, the activities would also help you to become fitter.
The club is situated between the coast and the mountains. For this reason, activities SUCH as rock climbing, mountain biking, hill walking AND other sports can be practiced by young people. Similarly, the club is organizing three activities near the coast INCLUDING windsurfing, body board and surfing.
Conclusion
I highly recommend you JOIN the club. Young people would find that adventure sports are an interesting and healthy way to spend free time. Likewise, the activities would also help you become fitter.